Tuesday, May 3, 2011

#9 draft

Having an understanding of a topic itself is very important when you are trying to learn about a culture.  Just memorizing information for one test is not enough understanding to truly get the different cultures and time periods.  When trying to understand a topic, memorizing the textbook will not help you learn anything.  Understanding a topic, such as codex manuscripts, helps a person understand the culture too because while learning about the manuscripts and the art in the manuscripts, you learn about the culture of that time period.  Being able to understand a topic has nothing to do with understanding the culture.

Another way learning about manuscripts teaches about the culture was in the language it was written in.  "Medieval and Renaissance Manuscripts is divided into a number of shelf classifications, including language and subject classifications MSS Dutch, Eng(lish), Fr(ench), Ger(man), Gr(eek), Ital(ian), Judaica, Lat(in), Port(uguese), Span(ish) and Syriac" (hcl.harvard.edu).  The codex manuscript was used all over the world in more than ten different languages.  Each culture had their own interpretation of the writings.  The manuscripts were known worldwide from all different languages, races, and cultures.   The cultures that used the manuscript were very diverse, and you can see that in the writing style as well.

One of the ways learning about codex manuscripts teaches about the culture was in the writing style.  " We ordain that slaves, or tributaries, or inquilini shall remain with their lords. For, when, dismayed by a fear of Ioss, each landowner begins to drive away those who are unknown to him, the will to flight will not be with the slaves; for no one deserts his lord knowing that there is nowhere a refuge for him as a fugitive "  (Codex Justinianus).  Compared to language today, codex sounds much more sophisticated.  The people must have been intelligent if they were going to write the manuscripts.  Reading the language used, these people were definitely smart.  The culture at the time was intelligent, and many people must have been well educated to be writing such incredible manuscripts.

The most obvious cultural connection is in the paintings and illumination in the book.  When each culture created the manuscript, they depicted their own opinions of the writings (figure 1 &2).  The differences in these depictions are based on the culture.  The painters focused on what their people looked like and based the characters they painted on their own people.  The people looked different, the horses looked different, and the decoration looked different.  Each culture depicted their own culture in the most creative ways.


Learning about the topic of codex manuscript communicates an understanding of the culture as well.  The writing, language, and the pictures, just show how different each culture was.  Each manuscript may have had some of the same writing, but their interpretations of them were very different.  Without these manuscripts, we would have no way of knowing a large part of our history, the Gospels were even written in codex manuscript.  Learning about the codex manuscript not only teaches about the manuscript, but it also has a much deeper meaning by teaching about the culture .
Appendix
Figure 1: Alwan Codex 2 Ethiopian Biblical Manuscript. (n.d.).Wikimedia Commons. Retrieved May 3, 2011, from commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:A
Figure 2: Miniatura dei Carmina. (n.d.).Wikimedia Commons. Retrieved May 3, 2011, from commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File

Works Cited

Houghton Library MSS Widener - Digital Medieval Manuscripts at Houghton Library - Harvard College Library. (n.d.).Harvard College Library. Retrieved May 3, 2011, from http://hcl.harvard.edu/libraries/houghton/collections/early_manuscripts/about.cfm#collection

Medieval Sourcebook: Codex Justinianus: Return of Fugitive Slaves & Coloni, c. 530 [Xl.48.xii.]. (n.d.).FORDHAM.EDU. Retrieved May 3, 2011, from http://www.fordham.edu/halsall/source/codexXl-48-xii.html





3 comments:

  1. 1. Five solid paragraphs, all of them have at least five sentences.
    2. Your thesis is kind of strange and should say what the manuscripts did.
    3. In-text citations should have author and date, and your bibliography is okay.
    4. You have four sentences of analysis in each body paragraph, good job.
    5. Very solid conclusion
    6. You really emphasize the info in the last body paragraph and explain how important it was.
    7. No personal pronouns
    8. Very readable and no slang or contractions.
    9. Most of the information is specific and pertains to your topic, and it is not an encyclopedia article.
    10. You wrote a lot more info than quotes so you really analyzed the quotes well.
    11. Very original voice, this is a very well-written essay. Keep up the good work!

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  2. 1. There are five sentences in each paragraph.
    2. Your thesis statement is very clear.
    3. There is one quote in each paragraph.
    4. There are four paragraphs per quote.
    5. Your conclusion is very solid and lets me know your final opinion on the argument.
    6. Your strongest evidence is in your fourth paragraph.
    7. Your essay is free of personal pronouns.
    8. There are no contractions and no slang.
    9. Your essay is not general.
    10. There is no unnecessary information.
    11. This is your honest essay!!
    This is sooooo gooodddddd!!!!! *jealous*

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  3. ELEVEN-POINT CRITIQUE: So i finished writing this and then it all got deleted, I hope I don't miss anything.
    1. Yes mam'm
    2 Good thesis, but it is not as clear as it could be. A thesis is not better just because it is long or wordy. You need to be specific and consolidate the information. You basically repeat the same thing twice. I would suggest to say something like, "While learning about the manuscripts and the art in the manuscripts, people learn about the culture and are helped to receive a better understanding of the codex manuscripts." This is just a suggestion, but you can definitely improve on your thesis and make it more clear. Also, get that YOU out of your thesis.
    3. Good, I liked how you used pictures.
    4. You have the minimum for all if not more (:
    5. FANTASTIC CONCLUSION
    6. Yes, I think so, but it is a matter of opinion.
    7. You have a ton of you's missy. IN THE FIRST SENTENCE YOU HAVE YOU AND IN YOUR TOPIC SENTENCE ..... aaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh .......... and more
    8. Yes
    9. Good
    10. AVOID UNNECESSARY INFORMATION = WORK ON THIS AKA THESIS hehe
    11. Very well done

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